Tango

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Tango

Artwork by Jackie Hogan

This is an Oil Painting I recently finished as a present for my mother. She recently moved to another house and chose “Tango” as a theme for my gift to her.

I would be most grateful for any critique you might offer to help me do better.

tango-painting

Thanks,
Jackie Hogan.

Feedback from Vladimir London, Drawing Academy Tutor

Dear Jackie,

Many thanks for your artwork. I like it very much. The composition is very dynamic, yet balanced. The colors create tension and passion.

There are also several golden proportions in your painting:

tango-painting

There is only one thing you might want to improve – include a shadow cast under the male dancer’s right foot. It will root this figure firmly on the ground.

To your creative success,

Vladimir London
Drawing Academy tutor

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This Post Has 2 Comments

  1. Jackie Hogan says:
    May 6, 2014 at 12:40 am - Reply

    Thanks so much for your kind and constructive critique , it is very much appreciated. Hopefully I will have many more paintings in the future to submit , I must admit that I work quite slowly.

    Regards,

    Jackie Hogan.

  2. Aarnaconstruction says:
    February 26, 2024 at 8:36 am - Reply

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