Artwork in graphite by Debora, Drawing Academy student

Artwork in graphite by Debora, Drawing Academy student

Town of wooden toys

Hello,

This is a still life drawing of some wooden toys, drawn from life. The lamp was set left and above the objects.

I would like to know what can I improve. Your opinion is very much appreciated.

Thank you.

Artwork in graphite by Debora, Drawing Academy student

Feedback from Vladimir London, Drawing Academy tutor

Hi Debora,

Thank you very much for your still life drawing. I like it very much; it is a really fine artwork.

Your drawing has a special feeling of warmth and calmness. This is not just a still life. This artwork tells the story and brings us in the world of a child who plays with those toys.

There are some small bits that other artists might do differently – giving more attention to precise perspective, accurately plotting cast shadows, depicting tonal values of reflected light a bit darker…

But I don’t think you need to change anything in this drawing because it is a very personal, creative and original piece of art and you, as an artist, have all rights to play by your own rules, presenting your view of the world to a viewer.

It is great that you draw from life. Please keep sharing your future artworks with us.

To your creative success,

Vladimir London
Drawing Academy tutor

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